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Hi everyone! Thank you for both reading the fic and caring enough to come and read my commentary! I've never done a fic commentary before, but with this fic, it turns out I have lots of thoughts about wish babies, taking about nine months to write said fic, and also writing fic for a show I have not watched. [As a note, I wrote this between Feb. 12 and March 2nd, so it doesn't involve anything to do with S8b or my more recent, ongoing watch-through.]


First, as of typing this, I've seen ... two or three episodes of 9-1-1. The season 8 Halloween episode got posted on twitter and so I watched it, then I watched the next... 2? Live. SO that was fun (Eddie Risky Business dancing and BuckTommy breakup live was an incredible way to start watching officially/unofficially). But for the majority of writing this fic, I was basing a lot of things off of what I learned from my friends in the fandom, who put together a powerpoint about the show/buddie specifically. Also I've read frankly more than my fair share of fic, and watched tons of edits.


WISH BABIES! As I said in the author's note, I started writing this fic because in a discord, we were talking about wish baby fics, and how they aren't terribly widespread, or popular. But those of us who've read them and written them love them, and we want more wish baby fics in the world. We were also talking about buddie/Bi!Buck in a different channel, so we all agreed that Buck would absolutely be someone who would get an accidental wish baby. And thus, this fic was spawned.


The main thing about wish babies is that "babies are born because people wish them out of the sky." When I first encountered the idea/what I believe is the original wish baby fic, I was thinking of it in a way that means every baby is wanted, and everyone who wants a baby enough can wish one into existence. Essentially doing away with people having children who don't want them and infertility in one fell swoop. But in thinking about how wish babies exist within a canon that includes that not-quite-happy accidental baby that is Chris, and the whole Eddie and Shannon of it all, I got to think about how wishing could be accidentally mis-directed toward a baby. Similar to how people sometimes think a baby will fix a relationship and that's practically never the right move, but with more wiggle room. Of course, wish baby universes are similar to the omegaverse in that there is no one set of rules, so if you prefer a wish baby universe in which many babies are born the quote-unquote “usual” way, but there are also babies wished out of the sky, that works too. But that's not the wish baby universe of this fic.


Okay, with that out of the way, let's get on to the contents of the fic!

Chapter by chapter commentary under here! )

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I should be sleeping. Instead, I'm watching Mythbusters, cleaning out my icons on my computer, EXCITED I GOT TWO NEW SPACES AND THUS TWO NEW ICONS... and now I'm going to tell you some thoughts about iChristmas. Because I can, I want to, and I've watched it more than twice in the last four-ish days.

- Apparently when Spencer was "born normal" he became a Stepford husband/lawyer. That's not normal. That's CREEPY.

- Carly has never seen any Christmas movie ever, right? Mitch is clearly Clarence, and angels have to get their wings. Duh. But nicely done with chicken wings.

- Spencer and Mama B are a creeeeeepy couple. Not to mention their Stepford-ness. Plus, you know if they're getting engaged they're sleeping together, and my mind is so upset it went there. Mostly because Mama B porn-thoughts make me uncomfortable, probably because she is a total wild beast and awesome, but she is Mama B. Just no. Also because my mind has already gone there because of that one fic [livejournal.com profile] jannika  wrote where they hook up drunkenly post-Christmas party.

- I like what this episode does for the trio's dynamic. Or rather, the dynamic our main trio has with Carly. I think the Spencer relationship is super obvious, and was spelled out during the episode. And Sam's relationship with Carly shows in very much the same way that [livejournal.com profile] folkloric_feel  and I have been known to discuss via iWon't Cancel the Show. So let's start with Freddie:

Freddie lets Rona WALK  ALL OVER HIM. He buys her whatever she wants. For what? The fact that she stayed, and was some form of a girlfriend for him. He needs some affection, some friends. And did you notice his outfits and his backpack? Mommy-picked, for sure. Just like Carly's style has always been out there in regular canon, and so making more out - there decisions (for a Benson) rubbed off on Freddie. Without Carly as a legitimate potential girlfriend, and a friend that appreciates him, listens to his opinion, makes fun of him affectionately, well, Freddie has no personality. And it's not just because Carly is wonderful and magical and all that - Freddie's always been a Mama's boy, and Mama Benson is overbearing. Carly lives across the hallway and is someone Mrs. Benson knows, knows her family, and can butt in at any time. For anyone else, any other situation, Freddie would have way less freedom, and so much less a personality.
 

Sam. Well, iChristmas shows us that Sam would be in juvie without Carly. And I also have to say that all of those little character details  are fantastic about Sam. And really, it's not that Carly has "kept Sam out of trouble" - but she's put her scheming and her mind and so much of her to good use instead of something illegal. iCarly especially. But also keeping her occupied, talking her out of going all aggressive in other ways when she's pissed or anything else. Best friends are so good that way. It's not just that you could call Sam a special case, it's that everyone needs a best friend.

- Jennette is a fanstasic actor. Miranda cannot fake cry.

- Normal trees can catch fire too, Carly Shay.

- Who goes to school on Christmas Eve?


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Before youtube decides to grace the world with the new iDo (and iStart a Fanwar promo) I can watch... have some iSell Penny Tee thoughts?

Liked:

only five! )



Nothing else really comes to mind. Although, I only watched it once, maybe twice.

Disliked:

more concise )


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My thoughts on iGet Pranky, with a special appendix on Sam/Spencer in both fandom and canon!

Things I liked:

 

Pros )

 

 

Things I didn't like:

Cons )







Sam/Spencer Analysis from the Captain of the Spam Ship / Queen of Spam

if I didn't have a little crush on you you'd be falling for my baseball bat to your face bit )


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WATCH THIS.

No, no arguments! JUST DO IT.





Did you just skip over the video? Fine. Go back and skip to 1:37. Watch. 


SO MUCH EPIC.

- Everyone saw Jerry and Jennette being a blatant couple, right? Right?

more analytical than you'd think )

- I now really want an icon of Jerry and Jennette now that's a series of still shots from this (where they're allontopofeachother) that says something like, I'm sorry, I didn't hear you, I was too busy being in love. Or something more awesome and clever, but similar.
 


heeeheeeheee How many of you actually knew I was this in-depth and insane in my shipping and fandom ways? muahahahaha

Also: THANK YOU TWITTER AND SOME GUY NAMED CHRIS. Because this is not only the best video ever, but it is a kick-ass question. I LOVE IT ALL SO MUCH.
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I think I need to do this again. Just because I have to. iSam's Mom: the likes and dislikes.

Like:

 

spoiler alert! )

 


Dislike:

 

no, really - there are spoilers here )




 

And... yes, I am procrastinating against schoolwork. I'm in the library and am a terrible person. :(
 


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Guess what I wasted a fair portion of my afternoon doing? Well, I slept for like an hour, but I also read fic! That's right, I read Spam fic, and thank goodness, since the last time I dared look on FF, they were better, there were more, and there was at least partial smut. Victory! Right? Well, yes. Admittedly, they were OOC, I somehow stumbled into chaptered unfinished fics, and there was really random angst. Anywho. I realized, there are things I take for granted and think, but other people do nooooot. So, list!

 

1. I do not believe Sam will lose her virginity to Spencer. I do not think he will be her first real relationship, I do not think that she will fall into goo-ness when they start dating.

2. I hate college fics. Most of the time. Yes, Carly and Freddie will most likely go away to college, and Sam will most likely not even or she will go to community college. Moving in with Spencer will very rarely be plausible, and it's been far too overdone that she and Spencer will fall into serious relationship category while Carly is away at school before she knows.

3. I do not like where Sam "changes" and suddenly looks more adult and that's why Spencer is suddenly interested in her.

4. I do not believe that Sam has been crushing on Spencer for a long time, or if she has, she has not acknowledged it.

5. The child from iSpace Out was not a time-traveling future daughter of Sam and Spencer. Just... no. Especially when the fic is told from her first person POV. Just... NO.

6. I do not care whether they are a secret relationship or a public one. Either depends on timing, situation of the fic, time period, etc. But either way it's done has to be logic and consistent.
 

7. Carly (I believe) will not automatically love the relationship when or if she finds out. She will react, she will be confused, and on some level she will be hurt and/or feel betrayed. I also do not think she will encourage Spencer in his affections before there is any sort of relationship. That being said, Carly will ultimately play a very large role in any public relationship there is.

 

8. I don't like first person in general, but I REALLY don't like first person when the POV switches within the same scene, and I really really do not like first person when it points out just how terribly awful your characterization is. Sure, delve into Spencer or Sam or even Carly's mind - but do it well. Or at least not suckishly.
 

9. I am not saying that Sam and Spencer can't get engaged, and I am not saying that Sam cannot get pregnant, but I will say that neither will rush into the relationship, specifically this relationship, and I know lots and lots of sexual tension floats around between them, but for heaven's sake, A- be committed one way or the other if they're going to have sex and B- they are not idiots. Do not portray them as such.
 

10. I don't care how in love she is, Sam will not cry or sob at the drop of a hat. I just - feel like that needs to be out there. She can be angsty without tears.


11. I really really do not think that Spencer will take Sam's virginity. And even if he does, it would be out of character for her to tell him, and inappropriate to mention in the middle of whatever sex scene is being written. That conversation, if it occurs, will be before or it will be after. It might even stop in the middle, because it doesn't continue.



The weirdest and most terrible part of this is that I can't critique (well, yes I could) fics based on these. Some people will see characterizations differently. Some things are personal preference, and only some of these go hand in hand with good or bad writing skills.

Yes, I will make a non-fandom entry tonight.... swears. :D

ETA: Number twelve? What the crap is with having Sam be a smoker? And Spencer also sort of kind of too? And like, he usually smokes pot, not cigarettes? Where did this mentality come from? Okay, lie, I know where, but WHY was it put in place? *irritated*
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Remember this from last year? I think it should be resurrected. So, to get the ball rolling, this is mine. Because you all need to do this too. For real. Because you all deserve presents. And lets be honest, we all know we're a bunch of procrastinators, and we have hectic real lives, so putting this out *now* means we all have more time to get things done on time! :D


makin a list, checkin it twice! )
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I feel like [livejournal.com profile] tweendom_anon  is going to be the best new thing EVER.

Please go and join. And request. And write.

And really, just spread the smut. It makes the world a happier place. :)
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I took this from (technically) [livejournal.com profile] poppyfields13's journal... but I got it from [livejournal.com profile] jannika  too. Technically, also. (See the font style/color? I didn't do that. That's Steph.)

A Holiday Christmas Meme. Go nuts! )

I hope you all are getting excited for Christmas! Like, don't be sad for the cold (for those of you in the north) - be excited it's going to be Christmas soon! *hugs*
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Argh - my internet would not work last night (as I tried to watch "The Itch" and do math homework... and I neither watched OR got my homework done) and I really shouldn't be doing this inbetween classes - but OH. MY. GOD.

HANNAH MONTANA SEASON ONE BOX SET.

I AM SERIOUS. ;ljmnfhio;ksldweniofgejklhnsd;ahfweio;alfneoi~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*FLAIL* And I promise you I'm not lying. There was a really short report about it. Emily and Moises were "stars in a box" or whatever. The segment wasn't that interesting. But OH MY GOD. Now can you please put KP in box sets in the US?

Also, as Rachel pointed out to me (um you are the BEST) ... Kevin? My favorite Jonas Brother who I am a major, major fan of? People's 100 Sexiest Men. Oh yes, that's right. SOME people understand he is the sexy one. *happy dances*

Another thing, watching season one Kim Possible is weeeeeeeeird. (1) Will Freidle still sounds like Will Freidle, NOT Ron Stoppable, and Christy still sounds like Christy, NOT Kim. I like it when they have formed their character voices. It's so much better. *nods* (2) There's music. Like, a lot of music. One episode there were two songs that are on the soundtrack. It just didn't feel quite right. (3) Wade is not so animated. I was all... O.o ? He seriously says, "Your arch nemesis Dr. Drakken!" A huh. (3) Drakken and Shego... their characters are not quite as fun. SO much meaner. And the little Kim-Shego banter that there was was ... bad. And about fashion. wtf? (4) The animation drives. me. crazy. It's all choppy and... weird.

*sigh* But I still love it. Just not as much as the later seasons.

*must actually do work now*

-Abz
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Look what I found. An answer to the puzzling question of what happened to the real first episode of HM S3.

Because it deals with diabetes, the Mouse isn't sure if it's ready yet, and they want it to be perfect, and make sure people are reacting alright. For right now? The episode is scrapped. *flail* I wanted to see "No Sugar, Sugar"!!!

Article below cut from this linkage

On second thought... just go look for yourself. O.o
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Sorry if you were looking for a real entry. It's just two memes. XD


1. Reply to this post and I'll assign you a letter.
2. List 5 songs that start with that letter.
3. Post them to your journal with these instructions.
[personal profile] cold_campbells  gave me the letter B  



Sorry this makes me sound like such a ... well - teenager. But five songs was not enough to include the lovely Drake Bell and Josh Groban. XD Both of whom almost changed my mind about these. 


Another meme, stolen from [personal profile] jannika, who DID tag me. XD

This is called the "alternative life meme" and basically you just have to fill out those questions with the fictional characters that come to your mind. BUT you can only pick a person once!! No repetitions, kay?  ( XD I may have cheated just a little.) Then tag 3 other users! Steal if you want!





Wow. Please don't judge TOO harshly by these. XD And I wish I was still able to fit more fandoms in there... :( (yes, I have tons)

-Abz (who will maybe do a real entry later)
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I "stole" this from 

[profile] poppyfields13

 

XD

Name a character that you know I write or have written, and I'll tell you:

a. What initially prompted me to like the character enough to write about him/her.
b. One of his/her best traits.
c. One of his/her worst traits.
d. How easy/difficult I find it to write the character.
e. The story/thread/chapter/post/paragraph/tag/phrase where I feel that I truly captured the character.
f. My plans (if any) to write the character in the near future.
  

 

Oh, and if you actually DON'T know (or would like more ideas) ... you could always go to my FF account! (Abster1 XD )

-Abz

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1. REPLY TO THIS POST, AND I WILL PICK THREE OF YOUR ICONS AND SEVEN OF YOUR INTERESTS.
2. MAKE A POST (INCLUDING THE MEME INFO) AND TALK ABOUT THE ICONS/INTERESTS I CHOSE.
3. OTHER PEOPLE CAN THEN COMMENT TO YOU AND MAKE THEIR OWN POSTS.
4. THIS WILL CREATE A NEVER-ENDING CYCLE OF SQUEE. WHOO!

Mine is from the lovely

[personal profile] stillthere4me

 




So, you know what I've learned from this? I talk too much. And I need to add on to my interests, as I really don't have that many. And I come off as a fairly boring person. There are SO MANY other things that could have been ranted about. *shrug*

-Abz

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 So this is a meme I stole from Poppy. Looks fun.

Pick a fandom you know I know about, and I'll tell you: 

1. The first character I fell in love with
2. The character I never expected to love as much as I do now
3. The character everyone else loves that I don't
4. The character I love that everyone else hates
5. The character I used to love but don't any longer
6. The character I would shag anytime
7. The character I'd want to be like
8. The character I'd want to slap
9. A pairing that I love
10. A pairing that I hate

-Abz

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